Assignment 22A: Elevator Pitch No. 3
1) Pitch
2) I was really happy about the last feedback. I was told that there was an improvement since the last pitch and that is also what I thought about the pitch. Furthermore I appreciate that I received positive feedback regarding my speaking skills and the connection I built up with the listener.
3) In this pitch I tried again to focus on speaking clearly, furthermore I took attention to the light in the room and the surrounding. This pitch took me less time to record it than the first and the second one.
2) I was really happy about the last feedback. I was told that there was an improvement since the last pitch and that is also what I thought about the pitch. Furthermore I appreciate that I received positive feedback regarding my speaking skills and the connection I built up with the listener.
3) In this pitch I tried again to focus on speaking clearly, furthermore I took attention to the light in the room and the surrounding. This pitch took me less time to record it than the first and the second one.
Laura,
ReplyDeleteI think you pitch was very well improved and that you properly responded to your feedback with the appropriate adjustments for your pitch. Speaking clearly and limiting distractions makes your delivery much more clear and helps your point get across to your audience. Your pitch looks more professional and more organized and released this time, probably because we have done it three times now, but it just goes to show that practice makes perfect.