Assignment 17A: Elevator Pitch No.2
1) Pitch
2) The most
surprising for me was that I got a positive feedback about the way I spoke. I
was quite insecure about that elevator pitch because English is not my first
language and I was afraid that I could not express myself the way I planned it.
I was also happy that I got a positive feedback about including an imagination.
I think there are no wrong or silly feedbacks, feedback is always kind of
useful, because it helps to improve the own skills or a product.
I was impressed by the idea of adding heated hand grips, this is a very clever idea and easy to add to the existing idea. I also think it is helpful to offer it with the heated seat cover to promote the sale of the product and to make it more attractive to the customer.
I was impressed by the idea of adding heated hand grips, this is a very clever idea and easy to add to the existing idea. I also think it is helpful to offer it with the heated seat cover to promote the sale of the product and to make it more attractive to the customer.
3) I tried
to add the idea of the heated hand grips to my pitch and strove to speak slow
and clear again.
Hi Laura, I love your presentation. It has improved since last time, but I think that's mostly because of practice; it is obvious that you know your product very well. It can be difficult to be a strong presenter when English is not your first language; however, you have very good speaking skills and your ability to connect with the listener made it a much more effective pitch.
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